reader. Begin with a striking opening sentence which addresses the readers and gets them interested in the topic. Present a strong argument for your ideas supporting it with evidence or elaboration. Use linking devices (‘however’, ‘therefore’, ‘although’, ‘even though’, ‘in order to’) to make the composition appear a whole. Introduce a new point at the beginning of each paragraph that follows to strengthen your ideas. Develop your ideas as much as you can to make them interesting and substantial. Conclude with your strongest point. Use passive voice, humour, emotive language, rhetorical questions to provide a specific effect. Split-up of marks:
I recently had the pleasure of staying at this resort in Shoghi, and I can't rave enough about the experience. From the moment I arrived, the staff's warm welcome set the tone for a memorable stay. The service was impeccable, with every member of the staff going above and beyond to ensure my comfort. The highlight of the resort was undoubtedly the stunning view it offered. Nestled in the hills, the resort provided a panoramic vista of the valley and surrounding hills. The sight was nothing short of mesmerizing, especially during sunrise and sunset when the colors painted the sky in hues of orange and pink. The room's large windows allowed me to wake up to this breathtaking view every morning, making it a truly enchanting experience. Even the journey to the resort was a visual treat, with winding roads flanked by lush greenery and picturesque landscapes.