reader. Begin with a striking opening sentence which addresses the readers and gets them interested in the topic. Present a strong argument for your ideas supporting it with evidence or elaboration. Use linking devices (‘however’, ‘therefore’, ‘although’, ‘even though’, ‘in order to’) to make the composition appear a whole. Introduce a new point at the beginning of each paragraph that follows to strengthen your ideas. Develop your ideas as much as you can to make them interesting and substantial. Conclude with your strongest point. Use passive voice, humour, emotive language, rhetorical questions to provide a specific effect. Split-up of marks:
We were couples(just 18+) and everything was good no one came to disturb us except one thing..a lot of disturbance was there in the corridor and we were clearly hearing those sounds which made us a little uncomfortable...but overall it was the best..the manager the receptionist all were best...will recommend for couples to spend quality time ☺️